帮忙修改下我的文章～（英语）Preparation for CollegeEveryone has the same e

帮忙修改下我的文章～（英语）
Preparation for College
Everyone has the same experience that studying hard for the university entrance examination.It must be a hard time for everyone,to me,it seems harder than others.
From the beginning,my studying driving motive was my grandma’s expectation.She liked Beijing very much,and she also hoped I could go to one of the universities in Beijing,so on the first day in high school I determined that I would study hard and go to Beijing with my dear grandma three years later.
For her,for my own determination,also for my own dream,I studied hard all the time,and always got the high score in every kind of examination,my grandma was very happy to see all the things,and I became more confident about making my dream and my grandma’s expectation come true.
But something unexpected may happen any time.That was summer vocation ,my grandma fell ill,suddenly and seriously.She could not speak and move,when I went to see her,she just wept.I did not know what would happen ,I just knew there was less than a year to take the university entrance examination ,I believed my grandma could wait for that ,I still believed I could go to Beijing with my dear grandma……
That was a snowy day,which was Christmas Day that was the day my dear grandma left me forever.I fell into deep sadness,I did not want to go to school,I did not want to touch books,I did not help myself crying……
My parents were very worry about me but they knew they could do nothing,no one could do something,and no one could save me from my deep sadness.
3 months later,it was not far away from the important examination,every student studied hard for it,but I still did not want to do that,because I lose the reason of studying.One day,I saw my grandma,I saw her under the sunshine,waving her hand to me,and telling me she loves me.I woke up with tear,I suddenly understood my grandma did not leave me,she was still around me,and she still loved me.
I began to have classes regularly,read books and not cry.Although there was not enough time for me,I still did not give up.
The result of the examination was not bad,my score obtained the ultra province heavy line,but I still could not go to Beijing as an university student,and I believed that my grandma must not blame me but be proud of me.
I never give up my dream and her expectation,now I prepare for the national entrance examination for postgraduate,and I believe I will go to Beijing as a graduate student with my dear grandma,and she is always in my heart.