帮我改一下作文好不````````谢谢`
帮我改一下作文好不````````谢谢`
I am live in B city.I think B city' traffic has many problems.For exanple,the street has too many cars.and the street is dirty and noisy.I don't feel well.And the bueses is crowded and alway late.so I often go to school late.As the taxi drivers,they are not polite.
I am live in B city.I think B city' traffic has many problems.For exanple,the street has too many cars.and the street is dirty and noisy.I don't feel well.And the bueses is crowded and alway late.so I often go to school late.As the taxi drivers,they are not polite.
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the street has too many cars.and the street is dirty and noisy要我写我这样写,It is dirty and noisy on the street for there are too many cars.
bueses is 应该是are吧
As the taxi drivers这一句没看明白,删了吧,也不是很有必要,写到这里.
还有I am live,错了应是I live in
bueses is 应该是are吧
As the taxi drivers这一句没看明白,删了吧,也不是很有必要,写到这里.
还有I am live,错了应是I live in
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