英语短文改错题啊将下篇短文改错 错误处有10处(可能不到10处) 每处错误只限1词 When I heared the
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将下篇短文改错 错误处有10处(可能不到10处) 每处错误只限1词 When I heared the news the famous singer Emil will come to People Theater to give a performance,I ordered five tickets immediately.Finally the day came I was looking forward to it.We went there on bus with excitement because we could hear him singing face by face.All the song lovers present got exciting the moment he was appeared.Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with the music.The concert was great success.After we returned home,we kept talking about it so that we couldn't fall sleeping.
将下篇短文改错 错误处有10处(可能不到10处) 每处错误只限1词 When I heared the news the famous singer Emil will come to People Theater to give a performance,I ordered five tickets immediately.Finally the day came I was looking forward to it.We went there on bus with excitement because we could hear him singing face by face.All the song lovers present got exciting the moment he was appeared.Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with the music.The concert was great success.After we returned home,we kept talking about it so that we couldn't fall sleeping.
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When I heard the news that the famous singer Emil would come to People Theater to give a performance,I ordered five tickets immediately.Finally the day I was looking forward to came.We went there by bus with excite because we could hear him singing face by face.All the song lovers present got exciting the moment he appeared.Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with the music.The concert was a great success.After returning home,we kept talking about it that we couldn't fall asleep.
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withinfree 幼苗
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第一句中will改为wouldThe concert was great success改为The concert was a great success后面的so that要分出来，其他的我就不知道了
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