英语作文 帮我再加两句上去.很简单但是明天前回答才给分
英语作文 帮我再加两句上去.很简单但是明天前回答才给分
这是大纲
1 Instroduction
Theme It's necessary to have a good command of English
Reason 1
English is an international language.
Reason 2
English is the most wildly used language.
Reason 3
Without good English,no good job.
2 Body facts
Supporting facts for reason 1
60% of the letters in the world are written in English.
Supporting facts for reason 2
People in 172 countries use English as their first language
Supporting facts for reason 3
Most companys require candidates' TOEIC scores over 700.
3 Conclusion
Opinions and a conclusion in two or three sentences.
It's obvious that English is very important; therefore,I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class.Dear Leving Ston,please give me an A so that I can get a good job.
这是文章
Nowdays,a growing number of people realize that it is very important to learn English .As the international language,English are enjoying high popularity in the world.It has become the most widely used language.With these reasons,such a phenomenon has been caused:People who learns English badly can not find work.It increases the enthusiasm of people to learn English.
According to statistics,there are 60 percent of letters written in English in the world now.And 172 countries use English as their mother language.Most companies also require a TOEIC score over 700 points.
All kinds of phenomenon indicates that English has played a popular trend.We must not only learn English ,but to do it well.Let’s begin from now.I promise that I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class and Dear Leving Ston,please give me an A so that I can get a good job.^o^
第二段太短了 帮我扩充两句 按大纲上写的 给我扩充下.请注意下,2段的根据都是一条一条对应一段那些理由的.
这是我以前的问题 里面好多人回答 可以做参考
http://zhidao.baidu.com/q?ct=17&pn=0&tn=ikask&rn=12&word=%D3%A2%D3%EF%D7%F7%CE%C4+%B0%EF%CE%D2%D4%D9%BC%D3%C1%BD%BE%E4%C9%CF%C8%A5%A1%A3&cm=1&lm=394496
请快点回答我,更正好了明天我就要重新交了,
顺便帮我把百分号数字什么的改成英文。
这是大纲
1 Instroduction
Theme It's necessary to have a good command of English
Reason 1
English is an international language.
Reason 2
English is the most wildly used language.
Reason 3
Without good English,no good job.
2 Body facts
Supporting facts for reason 1
60% of the letters in the world are written in English.
Supporting facts for reason 2
People in 172 countries use English as their first language
Supporting facts for reason 3
Most companys require candidates' TOEIC scores over 700.
3 Conclusion
Opinions and a conclusion in two or three sentences.
It's obvious that English is very important; therefore,I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class.Dear Leving Ston,please give me an A so that I can get a good job.
这是文章
Nowdays,a growing number of people realize that it is very important to learn English .As the international language,English are enjoying high popularity in the world.It has become the most widely used language.With these reasons,such a phenomenon has been caused:People who learns English badly can not find work.It increases the enthusiasm of people to learn English.
According to statistics,there are 60 percent of letters written in English in the world now.And 172 countries use English as their mother language.Most companies also require a TOEIC score over 700 points.
All kinds of phenomenon indicates that English has played a popular trend.We must not only learn English ,but to do it well.Let’s begin from now.I promise that I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class and Dear Leving Ston,please give me an A so that I can get a good job.^o^
第二段太短了 帮我扩充两句 按大纲上写的 给我扩充下.请注意下,2段的根据都是一条一条对应一段那些理由的.
这是我以前的问题 里面好多人回答 可以做参考
http://zhidao.baidu.com/q?ct=17&pn=0&tn=ikask&rn=12&word=%D3%A2%D3%EF%D7%F7%CE%C4+%B0%EF%CE%D2%D4%D9%BC%D3%C1%BD%BE%E4%C9%CF%C8%A5%A1%A3&cm=1&lm=394496
请快点回答我,更正好了明天我就要重新交了,
顺便帮我把百分号数字什么的改成英文。
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这位同学,看了一下你的文章,发现还存在一些错误,另外,有些表达不够地道.下面是我在你的文章基础上,修改出来的建议,希望对你有帮助.
Nowdays, a growing number of people realize that it is very important to learn English well.As an international language, English is now enjoying its high popularity in the world.
According to the recently investigated statistics, sixty percent of letters in the world are now written in English and one hundred and seventy two countries are using English as their mother language. Obvously, English has become an international language and the most widely used language in the world. What's more, most companys require candidates' TOEIC scores over 700, which means that without good English, no good job.
All in all, such kinds of phenomenon has indicated that English are playing a popular role in our world stage. We must not only go to learn English , but also should learn it well. Let’s begin from now on. I promise that I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class and Dear Leving Ston, please give me an A so that I can get a good job. Your favorable help will be appreciated.
另外,建议你数据不要改成英文.用数字会让你的分析更加明显~
Nowdays, a growing number of people realize that it is very important to learn English well.As an international language, English is now enjoying its high popularity in the world.
According to the recently investigated statistics, sixty percent of letters in the world are now written in English and one hundred and seventy two countries are using English as their mother language. Obvously, English has become an international language and the most widely used language in the world. What's more, most companys require candidates' TOEIC scores over 700, which means that without good English, no good job.
All in all, such kinds of phenomenon has indicated that English are playing a popular role in our world stage. We must not only go to learn English , but also should learn it well. Let’s begin from now on. I promise that I will be attentive in Leving Ston' class and Dear Leving Ston, please give me an A so that I can get a good job. Your favorable help will be appreciated.
另外,建议你数据不要改成英文.用数字会让你的分析更加明显~
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