英语改错、、英语高手帮下忙 To my opinion,there are advantages and disadva
英语改错、、英语高手帮下忙
To my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages traveling either by plane andby train.Travel by plane is time-saving ,comfortably,and you can have a good rest on the trip,but it is too expensive .Unless you travel by train,it is not expensive and you can appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both side of the railway.However ,it was too crowded and tiame-wasting,and you can take a good raet.So you can see every coin has two sides.You'd better to choos either of them depending on your own interest or economy.
To my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages traveling either by plane andby train.Travel by plane is time-saving ,comfortably,and you can have a good rest on the trip,but it is too expensive .Unless you travel by train,it is not expensive and you can appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both side of the railway.However ,it was too crowded and tiame-wasting,and you can take a good raet.So you can see every coin has two sides.You'd better to choos either of them depending on your own interest or economy.
赞 o安子o 幼苗
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In my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages of traveling either by plane or by train.Travelling by plane is time-saving ,comfortable,and you can have a good rest during the trip,but it is too expensive .If you travel by train,it is not expensive and you can appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides（ 或者把both 改成 either） of the railway.However ,it was too crowded and time-wasting,and you can not take a good rest.So you can see every coin has two sides.You'd better choose either of them depending on your own interest and economic condition
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wang_wenke 幼苗
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第一句to改为in，by plane andby ，and变成or，接着Travel by plane 中第一个单词家ing，comfortably,中y改为e，it was too crowded 中最后一个词去掉ed，take a good raet，最后单词错误，改为rest，好了，你先用着
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