帮忙检查一个英语短文改错.One Sunday morning,my mother and I went to 1.th

帮忙检查一个英语短文改错.
One Sunday morning,my mother and I went to 1.
the West Lake together happy,where we found a girl 2.
crying in a corner,Mum and I went up to him,asking 3.
what her name was but where shhe lived.She couldn't 4.
give the answers,so we have to send her to the police 5.
station of the park,where she was taken good care.6.
The news of the lost girl was being broadcast quickly.7.
After some time in came the parents of girl.They were 8.
exciting to see their daughter.They expressed their 9.
thank to us.Then we said good-bye to each other.10.
1.√
2.happy --> happily
3.him-->her
4.but-->and
5.have-->had
6.在care后+of
7.broadcast后+ed
8.of和girl之间+the
9.exciting-->excited
10.thank-->thanks
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静静007 春芽

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1.改正:
第七行:去掉being
2.broadcast的过去分词有两种形式:broadcasted和broadcast.
所以“broadcast后+ed”是没有必要的.
从句意来看,用过去进行时“正在被广播”是不对的,只需使用一般过去时即可.
3.别的都很正确,楼主加油!

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