这句英语通顺么?I think the good English skill is necessary in futur

1 "英语技巧"前应添加"掌握" command
2 "在未来工作" 应改为 "对于未来的事业"
3"in domestic or abroad"语法不通 in 介词,后面怎么加形容词domistic和副词abroad?
4"it is essential for communicating with your business parter abroad" It代替后面的动词不定式 ,改为 to communicate...
5 "business skills"意思不通
I think a good command of English is beneficial for your future career wherever you work ,domistically or abroad.I also believe that it is essential to communicate well with our future business partners abroad.So I have learned a lot of business English and as a result have acquired some useful skills for business negotiation.

I think English skill is necessary to future work,whether you work domesticly or abroad.It's a basic quality to communicate with your business partner abroad.That's why I learnt a lot of business English and acquired some useful business skills.

这个挺麻烦的，给点分嘿嘿

I believe that(不要总用think) the good English skill is necessary in future work,
你这句子有点儿头重脚轻啊~~我觉得应该写成i believe that it is neccessary that people have the excellent skills in english in the future.

**不能用the good English skill，好怪
**用work也不太好
**domestic来说，多是作abject 用，而noun用的话则是家佣 or 家庭纠纷
i think learning English is necessary for our future,
**abroad这里不好用
it is essential for co...