英语改错 悬赏100分（每对一个额外加15分.满意的再加30分）（!宁缺毋滥!）
英语改错 悬赏100分（每对一个额外加15分.满意的再加30分）（!宁缺毋滥!）
英语作文（我的作文句子错误）
错句①every summer from around the world in thousands of people come here,walking,swimming,shoping.
我的原意是：每个夏天来自世界各地数以千计的人来到这里,散步,游泳,在街上购物.
错句②I like music,reading and foreign culture.I excel at the sports and made friends.I can speak English.
我的原意是：我喜欢音乐,读书和外国文化.我擅长体育和结交朋友,我会讲英语.
错句③not far from the university of Birmingham.
我的原意是：离伯明翰大学不远的地方
错句④The new energy is developed,new energy has replaced petroleum in energy.
我的原意是：新能源被开发利用、 新能源已取代石油等能源.
错句⑤the more convenient quick transportation vehicle appeared.people can go to space travel and vacations in tourism.
我的原意是：更方便更快捷的交通工具出现.人类可去太空旅行和度假.
错句⑥The robot enters the commoon people's family
我的原意是：机器人进入百姓家庭.
以上,虽然看起很多,但其实错得都很低级,英语能上100分的人应该都能改出来吧..
如果可以的话希望能指出错误的地方在哪并写出正确的句子.（速求）
这个机器人进入百姓家庭指的是普及的意思
英语作文（我的作文句子错误）
错句①every summer from around the world in thousands of people come here,walking,swimming,shoping.
我的原意是：每个夏天来自世界各地数以千计的人来到这里,散步,游泳,在街上购物.
错句②I like music,reading and foreign culture.I excel at the sports and made friends.I can speak English.
我的原意是：我喜欢音乐,读书和外国文化.我擅长体育和结交朋友,我会讲英语.
错句③not far from the university of Birmingham.
我的原意是：离伯明翰大学不远的地方
错句④The new energy is developed,new energy has replaced petroleum in energy.
我的原意是：新能源被开发利用、 新能源已取代石油等能源.
错句⑤the more convenient quick transportation vehicle appeared.people can go to space travel and vacations in tourism.
我的原意是：更方便更快捷的交通工具出现.人类可去太空旅行和度假.
错句⑥The robot enters the commoon people's family
我的原意是：机器人进入百姓家庭.
以上,虽然看起很多,但其实错得都很低级,英语能上100分的人应该都能改出来吧..
如果可以的话希望能指出错误的地方在哪并写出正确的句子.（速求）
这个机器人进入百姓家庭指的是普及的意思
赞 鸟声鱼汤 幼苗
共回答了20个问题采纳率：100% 举报
错句1.语法错误,不能用 in thousands of people.应该是：
During every summer,thousands of people from around the world come here to walk,swim,and shop.
错句2.语句不通,听起来很怪.应该是：
I like listening to music,reading books,and studying foreign cultures.I am good at sports and making friends with people.I can also speak English.
错句3.句子不完整,应该是：
It's not far from the university of Birmingham.
错句4....嗯,写太复杂了.应该是：
The new energy has been developed and it's used to replace petroleum energy.
错句5.句子不通,应该是：
As more and more convenient and efficiency transportion appear,human traveling in space is not a dream anymore.
我稍微改了一下原句（不然不好改英文）：更方便更快捷的交通工具出现,人类去太空旅行已经不是梦了.
错句6.句子不通,应该是：
Robots are commom in people homes.
希望我能帮到你!
During every summer,thousands of people from around the world come here to walk,swim,and shop.
错句2.语句不通,听起来很怪.应该是：
I like listening to music,reading books,and studying foreign cultures.I am good at sports and making friends with people.I can also speak English.
错句3.句子不完整,应该是：
It's not far from the university of Birmingham.
错句4....嗯,写太复杂了.应该是：
The new energy has been developed and it's used to replace petroleum energy.
错句5.句子不通,应该是：
As more and more convenient and efficiency transportion appear,human traveling in space is not a dream anymore.
我稍微改了一下原句（不然不好改英文）：更方便更快捷的交通工具出现,人类去太空旅行已经不是梦了.
错句6.句子不通,应该是：
Robots are commom in people homes.
希望我能帮到你!
1年前
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linyuwei1234 幼苗
共回答了22个问题 举报
1.Thousands of people around the world come here every summer,walking, swimming and shopping.
2.I like listening to music,reading and learning foreign cultures.I`m good at doing sports.I enjoy mak...
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