you name is NANA.a firend of yours LULU.has writen to you ak

Dear Lulu,
How are you lately?I have received your letter yesterday,and I am glad that you have the ardor and aspiration to start a business yourself.However,with the greatest regret I must declare that I cannot help you financially.It is because I have great expenses,such as university fees,money that I need to give to my parents,and so on.I am also in debt myself currently.Therefore I afraid I cannot offer the help you desire.I suggest you to contact jim Clark,who may be able to help you.I wish you luck and success in doing business.
Best regards,
Your friend,
Nana

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I have received your letter yesterday, and I am glad to hear that you will start a business . That's sound a good idea.
However, I am sorry inform you I cannot help you from fin...

Hi Lulu
It is nice to hear from you and i hope you are well.
i am glad you want to start a new business soon and i think it may turn a new page of your life. i wish i could lend you some money...