哪位好心人能帮小女写一篇英语作文呢?感激不尽啊～

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Today is Monday.I get up early as usual.After breakfast,I go to school by bus.Today I have eight classes.I like English best and study hard,in order to achieve high grades.I often play games with my classmates after class.I go home with my friends when I finish school .I began to do my homework after having dinner.I watch TV sometimes .I go to bed about 9 o'clock.
【翻译】：今天是星期一,我像往常一样早起.早餐后,我坐车去学校.今天我有八节课,我最喜欢上英语课并且我学的很用功,为的是取得好成绩.我经常和我的同学在课间玩游戏.放学后,我和我的朋友们一起回家.晚饭后,我开始写作业.我有时会看会儿电视.我在九点左右的时候会去睡觉.

Today is Monday，I get up early as usual，After breakfast，I go to school by bus.today I have eight classes I like English very well and when I have rest play games with my classmate .when I finish school I go home with my friend when I finish dinner I do my homework and watch TV At 8 o'clock I go to bed .

Today is Monday.I get up at half past six. I brush my teeth and wash my face. Then I have breakfast.Twenty minutes later,I go to school.At school,I have classes.I like Chinese best. After school,I play games and watch TV.At seven o'clock,I do my homework.I go to bed at nine o'clock.