英语作文：travelling in shanghai in the future

When I came to Shanghai, I can see many beautiful things. High buildingsand all kinds of automobile. Many people usually go shopping and tourism industry. Shanghai will have a lot of delicious food, such as Glutinous Rice Balls, steamed stuffed bun, Italy style wonton... In the future, I think the environment will be very beautiful, I like Shanghai very much.
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