后天就交稿了,老师说我语法和个别句子有问题,可是我不知道是哪些有问题,凌乱了,

后天就交稿了,老师说我语法和个别句子有问题,可是我不知道是哪些有问题,凌乱了,
3.1 The Cultural Background of The Western Valentine's DayThe western valentine's day comes from Christianity,its expression is individual citizens to pursue good love and express love make public,emphasis on real life,enjoy the carnival,full of strong humanism and religious color.Valentine's day fully comply with westerners to individualism as the center of the value concept,pay attention to individual citizens development and meet the needs of individuals humanistic philosophy.
3.2 The Cultural Background of The Double Seventh Festival
The Double Seventh Festival no matter from the form to the nature,is all for the Confucian ethics said support family system and service,with the hundred schools of thought a school culture,contains rich ethical culture,and has strong moral connotation,lack of recreation opportunity,lack of secular needed entertainment colour and western compared to valentine's day.Based on agricultural economy on the basis of the family system is based on Chinese traditional culture of the social structure.Therefore,the Tanabata love outstanding "family" concept,the emphasis is the family harmony happy.
Ⅳ The Different Celebrating Ways of The Two Festivals4.1 The Celebrating Ways of The Western Valentine's Day
In Wales wooden love spoons were carved and given as gifts on February 14th.Hearts,keys and keyholes were favorite decorations on the spoons.The decoration meant,"You unlock my heart!"
In the Middle Ages,young men and women drew names from a bowl to see who their valentines would be.They would wear these names on their sleeves for one week.To wear your heart on your sleeve now means that it is easy for other people to know how you are feeling.
In some countries,a young woman may receive a gift of clothing from a young man.If she keeps the gift,it means she will marry him.
The Times are different celebrate in different ways,but usually in valentine's day,to give a red roses to express the affection between the lover.Will a semi-open red rose with a piece of form color beautiful green leaves,and then packed in a transparent single flower glue bag,in the lower half of the flower stalk with ribbons tied on a beautiful bowknot,forming a exquisitely beautiful small bouquet,as the best gift that valentine's day.The rose is one of the world's major gift flower that one of the single-minded,emotion and vitality.Rose usually have a deep red,pink,yellow,white colour.