写英语短文我告诉你我想要的意思 要初一年水平提示:昨天是妇女节.小刚想送给妈妈一个特殊的礼物 关键词:Women's D

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Yesterday was an international annual day---Women's Day.Xiao Gang ran to home quickly.He bought some meat and vegetables on his way home.He wanted to give his parents a big surprise,so as soon as he got home,he cooked meals by himself.At the same time,his parents came back,they knew that Xiao Gang has cooked meals for them.They had meals together.Then his parents praised him.His mother was very happy.So was Xiao Gang.
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