各位英语达人能否帮助小弟我解决一下英语中的语法问题并改正先谢谢了

1.I hurry to dress up and go for a walk near by.
2.How to start writing an essaies or paragraphs in 2 months to develop my
poor English.
3.people like to live together because without love ,it is very pathetic.
4.One of the most important Chinese festivals is the Chinese New Year.
5.Company need advertisements in order not to be left behind their
competitors.
6.These two examples are very good to prove the advantage of a divorce.
7.To overcome our bad habits, we need a lot of time.
8.To be a good doctor ,you should treat your patients politely.
9.To drive a car ,you must have a driver's licence.
10. everybody comes to school must study hard.
11.From this message, it seems that they are trying to tell us they have already divorced.
12.I found that the length of a sentence between writing and speaking.
13.I think when we want to get married with the other one.
14.The most special thing is the " Red Pocket, " which is the " Lucky Money"
that the married people give the children.
15.If i miss some information to tell ,you can make your complement
by saying your additional information.
16.I hope that the number of single mothers does not increase in the future.
17.That I have obtained full marks in all the subjects makes me excited.
18.That everybody works hard for their diplomas.
19.I translate from Korea. So I confused by two languages.
20.I tried hard, but I couldn't do much better than before.
21.Man never think not only the fun is the girl, but women are also the same as .
22.Nowadays the transit system becomes popular; it gives convenience to
the people and it also provide tourists with the pleasure of travelling.
恩 以上是我自己的意见,希望能帮到吧 o(∩_∩)o...