七年级英语第63页3b的那篇作文怎么写

Thursday,August 1st
Today I went to the Palace Museum.It was cool.Then I went to the Great Wall,it was really great and it was crowded.In the afternoon.I visited Tian'an Men Square,it was pretty large.There were many people there.I took many photos.In the evening,I visited a Beijing Hutong,it was reslly interesting.
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then i went to the Great Wall, it was great. i also went to Tian'an Men Squwre, it was beautiful. In the afternoon, I came to a beijing Hutong,it was crowded.i love beijing very much.