请帮我找出十个错误Ken is a young man and have a big dog and a small c

请帮我找出十个错误
Ken is a young man and have a big dog and a small car.Last Sunday he did some shopping for hour in a shop and then ran out and jump into a car.His dog came after him,but it jumped into the next one.Ken saw it and shouted it,but the dog still stays in that car.Ken gave his key into the lock of the car,but the key couldn`t turn on.Ken looked at the car again.It was not him!He was in the wrong car,when the dog was in the right one!At last the young man was smiled and got into his car with the dog.
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kyujtyh 幼苗

共回答了22个问题采纳率:90.9% 举报

1Ken is改为has
2for hour改为 hours/an hour
3.jump into改为jumped
4 still stays 改为stayed
5gave his key改为put
6the key couldn`t改为the car couldn`t
7not him改为his
8when the dog改为 while
9the young man was smiled改为删去was

1年前

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小小花花猪 幼苗

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I think it is more than ten mistakes

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意真 幼苗

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have--has
hour--hours
jump-jumped
shouted-shouted to
stays-stayed
gave--put?
was smiled--smiled
but the key couldn`t turn on--but the car couldn`t turn on?

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dhmin 幼苗

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。。这让我如何回答呢 1.Ken is a young man and have a big dog and a small car.把前一个and去掉2Last Sunday 加个,3he did some shopping for +an hour~ 4 then ran out and jump into a car
ran和jump都要用过去式5..His dog came af...

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ffqqxuguohua 幼苗

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第一句可以改为:Ken is a young man who has a big dog and a small car.Last Sunday he was shopping in a shop four 1 hour,then he went and got in the car.其他好像没什么错了。

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