一片课后练习,要写个短文,刚学,初写.错少不了.麻烦给看看,最好能多说下为何错了,

一片课后练习,要写个短文,刚学,初写.错少不了.麻烦给看看,最好能多说下为何错了,
Hello paul!
Good morning!
I have just come back my home.
I had a good time for these days in Australia.Stay with you was very happy.Thank for your entertain.This is my first came to Australia,so many this is curious a lot and I very like your meals.To tell you the true,even i eat more than at home.Haw-haw!You cooking is the best in I know people.Especially it's that lobster,it's very delicious!I wish I could taste your dish,even it's only a bite.Thanks for your care again!
Now I am listening music that you send me and I am writing this letter to you.The music is good too.
Though we can't often meet,but we can keep connecting by E-mail.
Finally,If you get change,welcome to you come to china.Your coming is welcome by anytime.
Yours PingLi
衷心的感谢所有的朋友，
大部分错，完全是自己马虎造成的。打完了，没仔细检查。比如拼写错误太不应该了。
我觉得很抱歉，大家都费了很大劲，帮我改错，但是分只能给一个人。希望没得到分的人别生气。虽然我知道你们一定很郁闷。