急....帮我翻译下下这段话好么?如果可以的话,也可以帮我添些句子..我是一只狗.我有一个主人.他是一个孤独的老人.孩子

I am a dog.I have an owner.he is a lonely old man.His children has grown up and left him to live their own lives.My owner treats me well.he treats me as his child.when i was little,he took good care of me,played with me,talked with me,although i didn't talk back to him in words.(这里我翻译的是虽然我没有用语言回答他,意思就是比如有感情和眼神交流等)
i love my owner.but now i am sick.i am shuted in a big house with steel bars.

I am a dog.I have a host.He is one old man that is standing alone.After child grow up also slowly leave he goes to the life that should have over them.The host are very good to me.The child whom I be...

语法都没有问题 最大的失误是 没有连接词 就像一些散句组合在一起！
大忌啊！