a pretty carpet(中译英)大家帮我看看哪里写错了呀?
a pretty carpet(中译英)大家帮我看看哪里写错了呀?
Wednesday November.Tenth 2010 Cloudy 14-22 degree Celsius
We have just moved in a new house.And I was busy for something all morning.It’s not easy for me to try to tidy up my room.I had more than 1000 books.What was worse,my room is so small that I could only put the book on the floor temporarily.Then,the books occupied the whole floor without any spacing.I went and come by treading on the books.A few minutes ago,my sister helped me to carry one of my old bookcases upstairs.When coming into my room,she was surprised to see these books on the floor.“This is the most beautiful carpet that I have ever seen.” She said.She fixed her eyes on it for a while.And she said “You don’t need a bookcase at all,you can sit here to read the carpet when being free.”
Wednesday November.Tenth 2010 Cloudy 14-22 degree Celsius
We have just moved in a new house.And I was busy for something all morning.It’s not easy for me to try to tidy up my room.I had more than 1000 books.What was worse,my room is so small that I could only put the book on the floor temporarily.Then,the books occupied the whole floor without any spacing.I went and come by treading on the books.A few minutes ago,my sister helped me to carry one of my old bookcases upstairs.When coming into my room,she was surprised to see these books on the floor.“This is the most beautiful carpet that I have ever seen.” She said.She fixed her eyes on it for a while.And she said “You don’t need a bookcase at all,you can sit here to read the carpet when being free.”
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We have just moved into a new house.And I was busy all morning.It was not easy for me to tidy up my room.I had more than 1000 books.What was worse,my room was so small that I could only put the book on the floor temporarily.The books occupied the entire floor without any extra space,so I had to come and go by treading on the books.A few minutes ago,my sister helped me to carry one of my old bookcases upstairs.When coming into my room,she was surprised to see these books on the floor.“This is the most beautiful carpet that I have ever seen.” She said.She fixed her eyes on it for a while,and then said,“you don’t need a bookcase at all.You can just sit here to read the carpet at your leisure.”
大体上没什么错误,表达的很准确.
给你稍加修饰了一下,主要的问题是时态前后不一致,然后有的地方的用词不是特别地道,比如最后的当空闲的时候,一般的习惯用法是 at one's leisure,或in one's spare time.当然你的说法从语法上讲不错,但一般不这样用.
大体上没什么错误,表达的很准确.
给你稍加修饰了一下,主要的问题是时态前后不一致,然后有的地方的用词不是特别地道,比如最后的当空闲的时候,一般的习惯用法是 at one's leisure,或in one's spare time.当然你的说法从语法上讲不错,但一般不这样用.
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Ichabod1982 幼苗
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整篇文章主要时态问题比较多，前后不统一，还有个别用法比较中式英语
Wednesday Nov. 10, 2010 14-22℃ Cloudy
We have just moved into a new house and I have been working hard all morning. I have been trying to get my new room...
Wednesday Nov. 10, 2010 14-22℃ Cloudy
We have just moved into a new house and I have been working hard all morning. I have been trying to get my new room...
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