英文改错题 (超难)下面这段写的错误多多,希望高手帮我改下错误,Personal computers and all t
英文改错题 (超难)
下面这段写的错误多多,希望高手帮我改下错误,
Personal computers and all the software to support these computers are appearing on many desks of Western Division employees.After giving the matter considerable attention,it has been determined by the Systems Development Department that more control should be exerted in coordinating the purchase of hardware and software to improve compatibility throughout the division so that a library of resources may be developed.Therefore,a plan has been developed by SDD that should be followed in making all future equipment selections and purchases.
各种错误，这是个大题，所以任何的错误都有可能出现，最好是重新写，只要保持意思不变，结构可以变
下面这段写的错误多多,希望高手帮我改下错误,
Personal computers and all the software to support these computers are appearing on many desks of Western Division employees.After giving the matter considerable attention,it has been determined by the Systems Development Department that more control should be exerted in coordinating the purchase of hardware and software to improve compatibility throughout the division so that a library of resources may be developed.Therefore,a plan has been developed by SDD that should be followed in making all future equipment selections and purchases.
各种错误，这是个大题，所以任何的错误都有可能出现，最好是重新写，只要保持意思不变，结构可以变
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Personal computers and all supporting softwares are appearing on many desks of employees of Western Division . Since this matter drawed considerable attention, the decision has been made by the Systems Development Department, that more control should be exerted in coordinating the purchases of hardware and software in order to improve compatibility throughout the division. In this case, a library of resources may be developed. Thus, a plan has been developed by SDD, which should be followed in making all future equipment selections and purchases.
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