请帮我找出这篇英语作文的问题.on the first day.we went to the great wall.th

请帮我找出这篇英语作文的问题.
on the first day.we went to the great wall.that is so beautiful.we ate some bad food.but the price of the food was low.next,we had some walks.by the way.there were many creative things to buy.at the end of the day.we got back friend丿s home by bus.on the second day.we went to beijing hutong.we took some photos.because
my friends hoped me can show some photos to them.we want to go there again.