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Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages.First of all,a child feels well aboutsaving an unwanted animal and gives it a whole new life.Second,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of a child had to feed,clean up,and exercise the pet.What's more,you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at pet store you may spend hunred of dollars.Another advantage is what pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness fora family.We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.So please take a pet home.一共是十处错误
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Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages.First of all,a child feels well (good) about saving an unwanted animal and gives it a whole (wholely) new life.Second,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of (去掉of) a child had(has) to feed,clean up,and exercise the pet.What's more,you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at (加上a) pet store you may spend hunred (hundreds) of dollars.Another advantage is what ( that) pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness for a family.We
( They) can be excellent company for a person who live(lives) alone or has lost a loved one.So please take a pet home.

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feel well 指的是感觉身体健康 feel good 指的是做什么事情感觉很好 wholely副词修饰形容词 because连词加上从句。 说明文的主时态是一般现在时 pet store可数名词 hundreds of 数百的 that引导表语从句,在从句中不充当成分 They指代的是宠物 Who引导定语从句,替代先行词a person ,所以位于动词该用单数
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