英语短文改错,速求 ,.快.Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has som

英语短文改错,速求 ,.快.
Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages.First of all,a child feels well about saving an unwanted animal and gives it whole new life.Second ,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of a child had to feed,clean up,and exercise the pet.What's more,you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at pet store you may spend hundred of dollars.Another advantage is what pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness for a family.We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.So please take a pet home,
幽谷百合3 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

杨臭臭 幼苗

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Taking 后面加上away 表示‘带走’, gives ---改成giving 和saving 并列做介宾;
because of去掉of,因为because of后面不能接句子,只能接名词和名词短语;
a child had to feed,把had 改成has,因为全文用的都是现在时;
at pet store在at后面加a,因为store是可数名词;hundred 要加上s,数目不确定时用hundreds of;
Another advantage is what把what 改成that; live 要加s,第三人称单数;

1年前

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007977 幼苗

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  • have和has的主语一般是人比较多,这里动名词作has的主语感觉会有点不协调,可以改成it will take some advantages to take a pet from Animal Rescue Cnter.

  • feel well也有点问题。well如果作为形容词的话多数用来表示身体健康状况良好,而不会只心理上的良好,可以把well改成good。

  • Second ,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of a child had to feed中用because而不用加of,had to用has to 就可以。Second, having a pet also provides a good opportunity for children's growth because he has to feed, clean up and train the pet.我不知道你的exercise是想表达什么意思,我这里就改成train了。

  • what's more, you will only。。。这里用一般将来时会比较好一点。但是,这整个一句句子有点表达不清,如果LZ不介意的话,可以跟我探讨探讨。此外,at a pet store,记得在可数名词前加冠词或在后加s。另外,hundred这个词,要么数词+hundred+n.,要么hundreds of+n.,所以这里改成hundreds可能会好一点。

  • Another advantage is what pets...把what改成that,因为引导的是表语从句。bring sth. to sb.,所以for a family可以改成to a family。当然,for也不算很错,for也算吧百搭,但是to用得顺一点。

  • We can be excellent company...和前面一样的问题,记得要在company前面加a。...a person who live...记得在live后加s,因为先行词是a person,注意第三人称单数。

1年前

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lxfwhq 幼苗

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倒数第二句We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.
主语应该是It,从句 who lives alone。

1年前

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老凌凌 幼苗

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Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages. First of all, a child feels well(well改为good) about saving an unwanted animal and gives(gives 改成giving) it (此处加a)whole(whole改为wholly) new l...

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