英语表达,急,那位高手帮帮忙,谢谢了

Now,there is a discusion about whetner middle school students should have computer of their own.Some people think there are two many negative things on internet which may attract their attention from studying. But, as far as i can see ,I think that is necessary for student to have a comouter.To begin with ,it is useful ,and students can know more by using computer.what's more,using computer can break student's eyes and keep in touch with their friends What i think the most importent reasion is that using computer can make the time of studying becoming more interesting and happy.
符合题意.