英语作文：谁是你崇拜的人、写福尔摩斯.怎么写?

My Idol
There are mang great people all over the worid.They make progress in different fields.The person who I admire most is Sherlock Holmes,the most famous detective in the world.
Sherlock Holmes is the character in Conan Doyle's detective novels.He is good at searching people ang he can find the details in every case.He always pays attention to every thing he agrees to do.He is really intelligent.But he is also kind.He once tried his best to help his friend,Watson.The reason why I really admire himis not only for his intelligence,but also for his sense of justice.
That's all about my idol.I really want to be a person like him one day.
怎么样?打英文打得我好辛苦的.还不错吧!

who do you admire most? it's Sherlock Holmes .