找出下列句子的错误(英语)A Map Look at the map on the wall.That's a worl

找出下列句子的错误(英语)
A Map Look at the map on the wall.That's a world map.There are many countries in the world.This is my country--China.China is a big country.This is Dalian.Dalian is a beautiful city.I come from Dalian.Now I'm studying in Beijing.Beijing is China's capital.We love Beijing.We love China.We love our motherland.(如果没有错的话,)
hyf1008 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

淡舞云裳 幼苗

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Look at the map on the wall.That's a world map.感觉太罗嗦了……只是个人感觉哦,我觉得应该写成这样你看可以吗 Look,there's a world map on the wall.不知道你感觉怎么样呢…… 还有Beijing is China's capital应该改成Beijing is the capital of China

1年前

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体育局域儿 幼苗

共回答了24个问题采纳率:91.7% 举报

语法上是没有错哦。不过有第一句可以看出是站在地图前面介绍的吧。我觉得把“this is dalian”改用“here is dalian”也许会更好点哦。多试着用用连词也好的,比如and ,but ,这样感觉更好些哦。不过刚开始学很不错哦!

1年前

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