纠正一下文章的错误The people i respectI deem Michael Jackson really e

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The people i respect
I deem Michael Jackson really encourage me and inspire me .I still remember i was so sorrowful when i heard the news about Michael.I watched "This is it" yesterday and learned a lot through this flim.this flim is zbout Michael's last rehearse of his LONDON concert.He si a perfect performer bu will never performe for us again.I respect him not only he was the greatest artist on the world but also his love."Love is important!""we do this just for love."Love doesn't have the enemy.Michael's love was so poweful that everyone was moved.
I respect Michael in that he is my aim and I think no one can instead of him.
Please keey your promise th Michael:Keep love in your heart.
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The people(person) i respect
I deem Michael Jackson really encourage(s/d) me and inspire(s/d) me .I still remember i was so sorrowful when i heard the news about Michael.I watched "This is it" yesterday and learned a lot through this flim.this flim is zbout Michael's last rehearse(rehearsal) of his LONDON concert.He si(is) a perfect performer but will never performe for us again.I respect him not only(because) he was the greatest artist on(of) the world but also(because of) his love."Love is important!""we do this just for love."Love doesn't have the enemy.Michael's love was so poweful that everyone was moved.
I respect Michael in that he is my aim and I think no one can instead of him.(take the place of him)
Please keey your promise th Michael:Keep love in your heart.
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