关于整容手术的英语作文,语法错误和论点上有没有不清楚的,或者指出不足也可以,谢谢美女帅哥了~╭(╯3╰)╮我在这里打不下

Would you like to become more beauty than people around you?Competition in reality of society make beauty obsession.Cosmetics might no long satisfy people’s appetite for beauty.With developing tecnolagy,cosmetic surgery has stepped into our life,like a magician,it turns an ugly duckling into a beautiful swan.However,do you really want the beauty brought by plastic surgery?In fact,the artificial look is almost nothing compare with one’s inner beauty except momentarily satisfaction.Contrary to expectation,common sense of the beauty is still disapproval of the fake beauty,not to mention plastic surgery is harmful to people’s health.To begin with,one’s outer beauty will fade quickly as time goes by,but one’s inner beauty will always shine.Elisabeth Kübler-Ross had said,“People are like stained-glass windows.They sparkle and shine when the sun is out,but when the darkness sets in,their true beauty is revealed only if there is lights from within." My best friend Joey back in Woodland school proves this idea perfectly.She is 7 inches shorter than me but twice mysize.Her friends always joke about her small eyes that she should open them sometimes.Even though Joey can’t be considered as a beauty,but she is still attractive.Joey is the president of Student Activity Council.She had organized many interesting and creative activities that brought joy and energy to my school.As a friend,Joey is friendly,humorous,honest and tolerant.She is like the glue sticks her friends together.All of her friends had said they couldn’t do anything without her presence.
Different eyes have different definitions on beauty.For example,some people appreciate small eyes,whereas others adore big one.In fact,people cultivated respectively have different sense of beauty.An American may adore women with tanned skin,full body shape and large,bright eyes.In contrast,Chinese usually like women with classical look that have skinny body shape,thin lips and small eyes.People describe their sense of beauty in the form of books,arts and media.They are the most successful method of communication because they travel all around the world.From these sources,people nowadays develop all kind of taste of beauty.So,one can never become more beautiful,because there will always be people opposite opinions.
Finally,plastic surgery have side effects which hurt one’s health,sometimes it is risky to life.Common cosmetic surgeries are breast augmentations,reshaping of nose and eyelid surgery.These surgeries require eithe skin removal or silicon gel ingestion.Cosmetic surgery has low risk in infection and scarring,however,if it unfortunately occurs,the effects on body are irreversible.People who failed cosmetic surgery are usually disfigured permanently.Also,there are underlying risks after the surgery.The silicon gel inserted into the breasts or nose can get shifted during exercises and damage one’s organs.The show 1000 ways to die describes a real story when a woman in San Diego got breast implants.The implants she got were substandard and filled with water instead of pure silicon.While on a plane,the atmospheric pressure caused the implants to expand and explode,and killed the woman.Life is a valueless treasure,we should be grateful for it instead of risk it for illusionary beauty.
All in all,a beautiful face is merely a shell.Self-cultivation,a good manner and rich knowledge make people to be more attractive.A beautiful appearance doesn’t make one to be superior also because of our various sense of beauty.Even if one believes beauty to be important,cosmetic surgery should never be considered because it associates with all kind of risks.A mistake during plastic surgery can lead to irreversible damage to one’s face and body,and may even cause death.Our appearance is a gift of parents.We are all beautiful as long as we have a positive attitude toward our appearance and appreciate what we already owned.

写得很不错，比我强，只指出几处小地方。
To begin with, one’s out beauty will fade as time goes by, but one’s inner beauty will always shine.
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Plastic Surgery
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