这句英语有什么错误吗?意思表达清楚吗?

这句英语有什么错误吗?意思表达清楚吗?
As for my English,I must say that I am not so good at writing,but I'm confident with my speaking skills.when I was in Japan,I really want someone to talk about movies(I'm a big movie fan) but onbody likes movie in my class.one day,my mom send me to a man to man oral English class,and the my teacher(he was a British) is a fanatical movie fan,too.so the desire of talking about movies with my teacher stimulated me to study English really hard.after I get back to China,in my school they have a Canadian teacher,and I always chating with him.thus things helped me to improve my speaking skills.
如果意思表达的不是很清楚请问我,我会回答的
这是写给美国的寄宿家庭的,想写的比较幽默
千鹤守望 1年前 已收到6个回答 举报

hxxssqnck 幼苗

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我在您原文本意的基础上,把一些语法上的错误修正了一下,并且让文章更口语化一些,
As for my English,let's say that I'm not so good at writing,but I'm confident with my oral English.When I was in Japan,I really wanted someone to talk to,about movies,but I could find no one in my class who was fond of the subject.One day,mom sent me to an oral English class,the teacher of which was from the UK and was also interested in movies.I was so excited that I started learning with all my heart,and I wished one day I could talked with him freely on movies.When I came back to China,I got acquaintance with a teacher from Canada,whom I'd always talk to in school.The experiences really helped me improve my oral English a lot.

1年前

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水凌斓 幼苗

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不对有很多的不对

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mechen38 幼苗

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时态很多不对,第1句OK
when I was in Japan, I really wanted to talk about movies with somebody (I'm a big movie fan) but nobody liked movie in my class. One day, my mom sent me to a man to man oral English...

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dd成功来发贴 幼苗

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As for my English, I must say that I am not so good at writing, but I'm confident with my spoken English. when I was in Japan, I really wanted to talk about movies with someone(I'm a big movie fan) bu...

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逸枫咖啡 幼苗

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As for my English, I must say that I am not so good at writing, but I'm confident with my speaking skills. When I was in Japan, I really wanted to talk about movies with someone because I'm a big movi...

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可米可非 幼苗

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对的

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