各位英语达人,麻烦帮我写两篇小文章

As time develops,there are many large changing happening in people ‘s lives .
Being like other West countries,private cars begin to be very popular in our country
Certainly,there must be many things following with it.Maybe it is good for our society,
Or maybe it is harmful.
Now,I’d like to announce some not mature opinions.In our lives,
especially in this century,time becomes more and more important
Buses seem to be more bulky than the private cars.We can go anywhere
which we like immediately in our own car.But,if you come to
wait for a bus,it will take your much time,and it’s more
likely to be no seats.In this hand,you must choice the convenient
way to buy a private car for yourself.
But do you ever think the harms for the society.I will bring you
some examples.When the time develops that time that everyone has
their own car,all the roads will be filled up by the cars.And there
isn’t place for you to remove.What will be performed in the earth is
obvious.This is not in the least.When the car is flooding,the waste
gas will be exhausted everywhere,so that the air we are living in will
be polluted seriously.
Are you agree with my opinions.Now,I’d like to make you some place to think
over what I said about the private cars.
English is important in the modern world.It is spoken all over the world.But a few students don’t learn English well.So they want to drop English.I suggest that you shouldn’t give up English,because English is used in many countries as the first or second language.Most business letters are written in English.It is helpful for you to work in the future.If you don’t know English,you will fall behind others in future.
How can you learn English well?First,you should persevere.It’s true that English is sometimes really very difficult for us.But if you have a good method of learning,I think you will be good at it.Both English listening and speaking are the most difficult for almost every beginner.Sometimes,it seems impossible to learn.But I think if you do a lot of practice,you will make progress,you should speak more and listen more often.You’d better speak English with your classmates as often as possible not only in class but also out of class.I advise you to buy a radio,so you can listen to some English programmes over the radio.Then you will travel in the world of English.If you do that,you’ll be able to learn English well easily,and you’ll like English very much.
I hope all of you will become good at English step by step.
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