修改一篇英文演讲稿下周一,英语演讲比赛决赛就要开始了.主题是关于家乡的.可我现在还没有头绪,大叔,大妈,靓哥,靓妺,爷爷

修改一篇英文演讲稿
下周一,英语演讲比赛决赛就要开始了.主题是关于家乡的.可我现在还没有头绪,大叔,大妈,靓哥,靓妺,爷爷,奶奶们帮帮忙哈.
Dream—all my life time
Ladies and gentlemen,boys and girls,
Good afternoon!Before I speak,may I ask a question?Do you have dream Maybe you have the different dreams; maybe some never have dreams.But I believe you may have the same dreams after I make the short speech.So my topic today is “Dream —all my life time ”.
Today,I stand here.I feel exciting and proud very much.First please allow me to introduce myself.I’m yanglei and I’m from a small countryside.So I know farmers are still living用进行时会更好 a simple life.
In our college many students who come from countryside have the dream.It is that they hope they can live a richer life in city数 But they may forget where they come from.Although country life is simple and poor,I will still come back my hometown after graduation.This is my dream from my heart .I hope I can improve my hometown.
As a Computer Science Department student in our college,I’m very proud of our college and our students.I’ll do my best to acquire knowledge .In future,I will devote all my life for my hometown.
Where there’s a will,there’s a way.I believe my hometown will get more beautiful and richer.Because my point of departure is to serve my hometown whole heartedly.I’m from countryside .I have inherited unyielding and unconquerable from farms; I have inherited kind and heartedly like fire .Let’s look forward to the dawn of better days .
These words are “My dream”.At last,thank you give me this chance for expressing my idea.That’s all,thank you very much.
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我帮你做了些改动,不知你喜欢吗?另外,我在结尾说"god bless you."可不可以?在美国那是很典型的结束语.你自己看着办吧.祝你演讲成功!Ladies and gentlemen,boys and girls,Good afternoon!Before I speak,may I ask y...

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修改的真好,高手!!佩服,佩服!!

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