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Never give up
About the “Never give up”, I want to say my idol,Kobe Bryant.I'm a girl ,but I love basketball. I love them because of my boy friend. We've always been a great fan of Kobe.
Kobe is one of the best basketball players in the world. He is very assiduous and emulative . His career is not smooth ,but he was confronted by it.He hurted his leg recently,but he doesn't give up his way. He said,"No matter what happened,I never give up my way".His spirit make innumerable people move.His every day,every hour,and every minute is special,harder than all players.
So, in my heart,Kobe Bryant's spirit si"Never give up".
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