以My besi way of going to school为题的英语作文

My Best Way of Going to School
Comparing with other ways of going school,I enjoy riding a bike best.
First of all,I can make more exersise during my way to school.Then,the
fresh air make me be comfortable all day.The most inportant is I can go with my classmates,we talk and laugh.
What a exciting way of going school!I enjoy it!
希望能帮上你.

you can fly if you were a fly

生活手段的进步，并取得进展的方法痛苦

60词的话语法要求应该比较宽
楼上的可以
不过有几个小地方
"during my way to school"during应改为on
during后应加一件事来表示一段时间 on my way在路上就可以了
"the fresh air make me be comfortable all day" make加单三为makes；
去掉be；all...