求大仙帮我把下面的这封信改一下错!
求大仙帮我把下面的这封信改一下错!
May 05,2014
The manager
DPI Healthcare Products
PO Box 1091
H
May 05,2014
The manager
DPI Healthcare Products
PO Box 1091
Hong Kong
Subject:Young Look Beauty Oil
Dear Sir
I am writing complaint the captioned product.I have ordered two bottles of your company’s Young Look Beauty Oil on 14 January and told it will take one week for arrival.
On the other hand,it was only arrived last week.Besides,your advertisement promised that I will immediately look ten years younger.Moreover,all of my family and friends say I now look ten years older.At last,according to your advertisement,the Young Look Beauty Oil is contain only natural product.But when I looked at the ingredients I found it contain many chemicals such as sulphuric acid and hydrogen peroxide.
I am very dissatisfied with your poor service!You must refund my money immediately.
Thank you for your attention
Your sincerely
Denno
May 05,2014
The manager
DPI Healthcare Products
PO Box 1091
H
May 05,2014
The manager
DPI Healthcare Products
PO Box 1091
Hong Kong
Subject:Young Look Beauty Oil
Dear Sir
I am writing complaint the captioned product.I have ordered two bottles of your company’s Young Look Beauty Oil on 14 January and told it will take one week for arrival.
On the other hand,it was only arrived last week.Besides,your advertisement promised that I will immediately look ten years younger.Moreover,all of my family and friends say I now look ten years older.At last,according to your advertisement,the Young Look Beauty Oil is contain only natural product.But when I looked at the ingredients I found it contain many chemicals such as sulphuric acid and hydrogen peroxide.
I am very dissatisfied with your poor service!You must refund my money immediately.
Thank you for your attention
Your sincerely
Denno
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Dear Sir,
I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about your product and the service that I have received from your company.
In the first place,I ordered two bottles of your company’s Young Look Beauty Oil on 14 January and was told that it would arrive within one week,but the fact is that it just arrived last week.In addition,your advertisement promised that your product would make your customer look ten years younger,but all my families and friends find that I even look ten years older than before due to your product.Moreover,according to your advertisement,the Young Look Beauty Oil contains only natural product,but when I read the ingredients I find it contains many chemicals such as sulphuric acid and hydrogen peroxide.
Under these circumstances,I am very dissatisfied with your poor service.I would appreciate it if you could refund my money immediately.Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Denno
I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about your product and the service that I have received from your company.
In the first place,I ordered two bottles of your company’s Young Look Beauty Oil on 14 January and was told that it would arrive within one week,but the fact is that it just arrived last week.In addition,your advertisement promised that your product would make your customer look ten years younger,but all my families and friends find that I even look ten years older than before due to your product.Moreover,according to your advertisement,the Young Look Beauty Oil contains only natural product,but when I read the ingredients I find it contains many chemicals such as sulphuric acid and hydrogen peroxide.
Under these circumstances,I am very dissatisfied with your poor service.I would appreciate it if you could refund my money immediately.Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Denno
1年前
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