帮忙看看这篇英语小作文有无错误The key to the heartEverybody should show you
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The key to the heart
Everybody should show your true heart.
It was that people usually think more for myself,and think less for others.This might be bad for people's friendships.Believe it or not,my parents often tell me to think more for others,treat everythings by heart.
Sometimes,my family give some help for our neighbor.When our neighbor told "Thank you."to my parents ,I fell very proud.I believe when my parents get older and older,they will get help from others,too.
Just like a key to the heart.I compare people's hearts to a door.And compare the key to the way to treat people and help others.We infenty our keys,and we find our door.The key only to a door.
That seems to be friendly to everyone.
Find wrong sentence and make it right.Many thanks.
The key to the heart
Everybody should show your true heart.
It was that people usually think more for myself,and think less for others.This might be bad for people's friendships.Believe it or not,my parents often tell me to think more for others,treat everythings by heart.
Sometimes,my family give some help for our neighbor.When our neighbor told "Thank you."to my parents ,I fell very proud.I believe when my parents get older and older,they will get help from others,too.
Just like a key to the heart.I compare people's hearts to a door.And compare the key to the way to treat people and help others.We infenty our keys,and we find our door.The key only to a door.
That seems to be friendly to everyone.
Find wrong sentence and make it right.Many thanks.
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Everybody should show your（应该是one's） true heart.
(It was that)(删去)people usually think more for myself(themself),and （think）（也可以删） less for （加the）others.This （might be）（换成更为肯定的is） bad for (people's)(删去) friendships（单数）.(Believe it or not,)（多余）my parents often tell me to think more for others,（一定要加and）treat everythings(不要s) by heart.
Sometimes,my family give（是gives） （some）（这里不要用概数词,删去） help for（应该是to） our neighbour(注意拼写,用复数).(加上everytime会好些)When our neighbours told(用say) "Thank(thank小写) you."to my parents ,I fell(换成always feel) very proud.I believe when my parents get older and older,they will get help from others,too.
（加上To show one' heart and help others is,否则没主语和动词）just like a key to the heart.I compare（用regard） people's hearts to（用as） a door（.And）（用逗号连接） （compare）（删去） the key to（用as） the way to treat people and help others.We infenty（这是啥词?） our keys,and we find our door.The key only to a door.
That seems to be friendly to everyone. （最后几句话表意不明……）
(It was that)(删去)people usually think more for myself(themself),and （think）（也可以删） less for （加the）others.This （might be）（换成更为肯定的is） bad for (people's)(删去) friendships（单数）.(Believe it or not,)（多余）my parents often tell me to think more for others,（一定要加and）treat everythings(不要s) by heart.
Sometimes,my family give（是gives） （some）（这里不要用概数词,删去） help for（应该是to） our neighbour(注意拼写,用复数).(加上everytime会好些)When our neighbours told(用say) "Thank(thank小写) you."to my parents ,I fell(换成always feel) very proud.I believe when my parents get older and older,they will get help from others,too.
（加上To show one' heart and help others is,否则没主语和动词）just like a key to the heart.I compare（用regard） people's hearts to（用as） a door（.And）（用逗号连接） （compare）（删去） the key to（用as） the way to treat people and help others.We infenty（这是啥词?） our keys,and we find our door.The key only to a door.
That seems to be friendly to everyone. （最后几句话表意不明……）
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