帮我检查检查,看看下列句子有没有语法错误

帮我检查检查,看看下列句子有没有语法错误
There is no water and no air on the moon.There is no gravity on the moon,either.You should wear spacesuit to take a spaceship to the moon.If you are 60 kilograms on the Earth,and you will be 10 kilograms on the moon.That’s amazing!
danqun 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

hhs12888 幼苗

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.If you are 60 kilograms on the Earth,you will be 10 kilograms on the moon
把and去掉 and是连词 连接两个独立句子
但是你是条件状语从句 所以不要连词
You should wear spacesuit to take a spaceship to the moon.
这句完全是中式英语 介词应该是on the moon 建议你用从句从新做

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前起落架 幼苗

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楼主好,

There is no water and no air on the moon
and改or

If you are 60 kilograms on the Earth,and you will be 10 kilograms on the moon
and去掉

希望对你有帮助^^

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