英语高手都看过来!帮忙修改一下作文(能加长的尽量加),要参加比赛的!

英语高手都看过来!帮忙修改一下作文(能加长的尽量加),要参加比赛的!
Holle,my name is mike,I'm from China,I am twelve years old.my favorite subject is PE,my favorite colour is blue,my favorite food is hamburg,my favorite sport is running and playing ping-pong.I love to wear sports.when I grow up,I want to be inventor.
梦想那尽量多加点!please!
口口妤 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

不-留 幼苗

共回答了26个问题采纳率:88.5% 举报

my English techer wears a pair of glasses.she often wears a blue jeans and a white shirt.she is friendly to me .I like her very much,.when I grow up,I want to be an inventor.I will make all kinds of things we use,such as robots,it can help our do some work we don't want to do.I also think I'll live in somewhere interesting.I'll keep a pet.maybe a pet parrot.I'll probably go swimming and do some sports on weekend.I'll be able to dress more casually.on vacation,I'll travel around the world.This is me.

1年前

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jy0310 幼苗

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表达喜好除了 my favorite 外还有很多种,比如 I'm interested in ...... , I'm fond of ...... , I prefer to .... 等等,多选择一些,避免过于重复。

1年前

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mu5101 幼苗

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很好的

1年前

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