初二英语问题【按要求回答,悬赏自己定,不要超过65】

My Summer Vacation
I had an interesting summer vacation.I stayed at home for a week.At that time,I did my homework in the morning and practised the piano in the afternoon.In the evening,I watched TV with my parents .It was boring for me that week.Next,I visited my grandparents in the country.I used to chat with them and do housework after lunch.I stayed there for a week,too.And then,I went on a trip to Dalian.I went swimming and went shopping there.People there are friendly and the food was delicious.After that,I went to Mount Huang with my sister,We climbed the mountains and We saw the sunrise.We had a good time.What do you think of my summer vacation?I think it's wonderful.
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the first week I stayed in my room did my homework and pricticed the piano.Then I went to my grandparents house ,I chated with them and helped them did housework,they looked very happy.
Then I went to DaLian whit my parents ,I was swam and went shoping.It was a really nice holiday!