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The most important person in my life
I may meet many important people in my life.But I think mother is the most important.And in my heart,no one can replace her.
She gives me life and keeps me company at any time.When I am happy,she smiles with me.When I am sad,she wipes off my tears and cheers me up.When I am sick,she takes good care of me.When I am in difficulty,she always gives me a hand.She gives me all that she can do and wants nothing.
I’m so lucky to have such a nice mother in my life.In return,I will do my best to become the most important person in her life.
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I think my mother is the most important person in my life。 And in my heart, no one can replace her.
She gives me life and brings me up.When I am sick, she takes good care of me. She gives me a hand when I'm in trouble.She does all the housework. She is also hard-working.
I’m so lucky to have such a nice mother. I love her very much and I will love her all my life.
大概70个字左右,现在怎么样?