请教！有学霸能够挥一挥手指头帮我指出下文的感谢信有什么语法之类的错误吗。 感激不尽！

请教！有学霸能够挥一挥手指头帮我指出下文的感谢信有什么语法之类的错误吗。 感激不尽！
Dear
DR.Zhu:
I
would like to thank you very much for your help and
consideration.You give me power when I feel helpless.When I hear the
sound of your voice, I dont feel tired anymore.Thanks God let me meet
beautiful you.You have a kind heart.Let me go on until and try to do
better. I will forever remember your great kindness and pay you back
some day. I promise I will help more people to the best of my
ability, and proud of this.
I
would like invite you to have dinner at HaiYa Mega Mall L4-002 call
“Bangkok Style”Friday 6:00 pm. .
Again
with many thanks.

Yours
sincerely,

Zhang
Mei