大家看看这篇文章有没有问题这是我的一个朋友写的有问题尽量提出来下面正文:Come on!YY!I belive you

大家看看这篇文章有没有问题
这是我的一个朋友写的
有问题尽量提出来
下面正文:
Come on!YY!I belive you can do the best.Don`t be afraid.You only
keep it going.If you feel loney.Turn round you head.I will behind you.
I will give you power,raise you up when you feel tired.Belive you can be suceese.Come on!
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思远爱睿睿 幼苗

共回答了20个问题采纳率：90% 举报

loney拼错了是lonely
.I will behind you是.I will be behind you
I will give you power,raise you up when you feel tired逗号改and
suceese是successful吧?
这是语法方面.
还有,表达最好改一下
如加一些动词
You only need to keep going.
give you power有点中文化
大概就是这样吧.

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牛头萨满祭司 幼苗

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没有问题啊!

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luren_z 幼苗

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Come on!YY!I belive you can do well.Don`t be afraid.Just
keep going.If you feel lonely,turn round,I will be there for you.I will behind your back, cheer you up when you feel tired.I belive you can make it.Come on!

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秋意浅浅 幼苗

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suceese应该改为success

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寻洁 幼苗

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Come on!YY!I believe you can do the best.Don`t be afraid. Just keep going.If you feel lonely, turn round and I will be behind you. I will give you power and cheer you up when you feel tired. I believe you can suceed.Come on!

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