给我看一下这句话The more scientists study the "wetware" model for co

给我看一下这句话
The more scientists study the "wetware" model for computing——the human brain and nervous system——the more they conclude that emotions are a part of intelligence,not separate from it.Emotions are among the tools that we use to process the tremendous amount of stimuli in our environment.
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我的翻译：更多的科学家研究"wetware"的样式为计算机人类的大脑和紧张的系统,更多的结论情感只是智能的一部分,不能和智能分开.情感在我们使用过程中和环境中都含有极大的刺激.
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