一篇关于“要想改变别人首先改变自己”英语作文

Change is indispensable to life a
action,perhaps,you will change their
career,maybe you'll change your status,
but whatever oneself forever is the most
important.
Change,can make you more
harmonious and his colleagues,can
make you look more excellent,can
make other people to you is very
satisfied,can make you more up a level!
Change,is the best choice.
A young man came to work in a
company,at first he hold all kinds of
lofty goals want to do a great business,
but then he found; The company all the
way up and out,as in his he is like air,
invisible,and generally feel it,as does
not exist generally.Various
pressures and prompted him to want to
dissatisfaction with another company to
begin his work,the new journey,but a
best friends said to him,"now find a
proper job is not easy,why don't you
look at yourself,then decide?" He
embraced the idea of try stayed.Indeed
he found,his own performance is not
outstanding,the attitude is not friendly
to colleagues,to work isn't aggressive
enough...Finally he a rude awakening,
after that,he became more friendly,
active,work hard.Also no longer as
usual go it alone,when he again meet
the best friends,the young man has
been promoted as a manager.
Change yourself,change is successful
state before,try to change their
shortcomings,will give you a
brilliant!Once,in near the exam in a
week for several times,test,I lost,in the
heart a remorseful,feel that they couldn't save good grades,is change
reminds me,make me change the
learning methods,won the final victory.
Change your,make oneself more
outstanding,more perfect,let life shine
for change.

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