这句英文对吗?My heart is a place forever belonging to you那我这样改一下呢？

My heart is a place forever belonging to you
这句话好象不好,改成这样子就更好了.My heart is the /a place belonging to you forever.
关于你改之后的这个句子My heart is a place forever where belongs to you 很明显是个错误的句子.你用的是where 引导的定语从句,从句是个不完整的句子where belongs to you 从句的主语呢?很明显缺少了主语,所以错了!应该改成My heart is a place that/which belongs to you forever
这样从句就完整了,你要注意that which where 等在引导从句时候做的成分.

My heart is the place belonging to you forever.

FOREVER通常放后面,但是好像放句中也是可以的就是有点别扭就是了.

我的心永远属于你对吗
my heart will always be yours