帮我修改一下英语作文,有什么毛病都指出来

帮我修改一下英语作文,有什么毛病都指出来
Working Individually or Working in a team
There are basically two ways to get work .One is to work individually.In this way,they need to solve probilms in their own.Besides,they can plan for thenselves what to do.Working individually is benefits for us to have a habit of think indenpently.
The other way is to work in a team.In this way ,students can solve problems together.They will get correct conclude,which after disussion.So they can study each other and strenthen their power of cooperation.
Compare with this two ways .I prefre to work in a team .Actually,teamwork is more improtant in our life .Under normal circumstances,teanwork is reqeired in order to reached some aims