英语高手来答：今天上午做的事今天下午提到时,用过去式吗?如不是,帮下个日记修改：

英语高手来答：今天上午做的事今天下午提到时,用过去式吗?如不是,帮下个日记修改：
a happy day
today is sunny.i go to my grandmother's family.in grangdmother's family,i see a rabbit.it has write fur.two long ears.it is beautiful.i play with that,jump,run.i'm
happy!
in the afternoon.we go home.i with my best friend Li Li to go shopping.we buy
books,pens and snacks.
today is fun!
不是叫你翻译，是在英语的原文上修改哦！