大家帮我看看这两个句子哪个好点一个男人爱你的时候,你往往会感动于细节,同样,一个男人不爱你了,你也可以从细节中来发现.1
大家帮我看看这两个句子哪个好点
一个男人爱你的时候,你往往会感动于细节,同样,一个男人不爱你了,你也可以从细节中来发现.
1)When a man love you,you will always be sweeted in some details.However,when a man lost love to you,you can also be aware in details.
2)
When a man loves you,you will be moved by his detail.
In the same,you can feel that he doesn’t love you from the detail.
请问,第一个句子哪里的语法错了呢?还有,重复的用词是哪个?
还有,如果作为唯美的句子,又是哪个好点?