短 文 改 错 : 急 急 急Moon is our nearest neighbor in space. It is

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Moon is our nearest neighbor in space. It is our satellite and men visited it many years ago.
The moon is small than the earth.
Plants and animals can grow on the moon, because there is no air and water on it.
The moon doesn't have it light. It reflects the light of the sun. Usually, we can not see the moom on the daytime. In fact, the moon is not as nearer as it looks. It is three hundred and eighty thousand kilometers far away from the earth.
People can get the moon in spaceship. It can go very fast. It take more than three days to get to the moon by spaceship.
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"The moon is small than the earth. "small用比较级smaller
"Plants and animals can grow on the moon" can't
" the moon is not as nearer as it looks" near
"It is our satellite and men visited it many years ago. "men换成human
"because there is no air and water on it"and换成or
“The moon doesn't have it light”改成“The moon didn't have light itself”如果是一般过去时的话用didn’t,一般现在时就用doesn’t不过我又看了看下文的时态,应该是doesn'tO(∩_∩)O呵呵~
“It is our satellite and men visited it many years ago. ”is换成was
“People can get the moon in spaceship”The换成to
差不多了吧!这可都是我亲手找的,还有什么问题可以问我。Good Luck!

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is our nearest neighbor in space. It is our satellite and men visited it many years ago.
The moon is than the earth.
Plants and animals

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