请哪位英语好的大大帮我看看这篇英语讲稿吧 明天就要讲了,

请哪位英语好的大大帮我看看这篇英语讲稿吧 明天就要讲了,
Enjoy the life
Hello,every one.Today I’ll talk about life.Do you enjoy your life?Someone will say ‘yes’,and someone will say ‘no’.
In winter holiday,I can sleep very late .but now I’ll get up at 6 o’clock.We can not always spend our life satisfy our institute wish ,so we need to get with it .
In our life,we are able to feel that happiness ,the meeting feel sorrowful .sometimes we will Come up against difficulties .but most of the time ,we are happy ,we feel luckily ,because we were born in this world ,we saw this world ,today we are sitting here.we met each other .we can talk,we can listen ,there are people who can help us ,we can help other people .the world is very beautiful .
In the TV,sometimes I saw many people lost their home ,they cried ,they gave up all hope .
But one day ,they must be firm ,they will have another home ,if they don’t lost hope .
When we enjoy our own things ,many people are Experience agony ,so we must enjoy our life everytime like tomorrow is the end of the world .
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事先声明我在美国上学..帮你改的错误请相信我..错句:(标题)enjoy the life改句:enjoy your life错句:someone will say “yes”改句:someone would say“yes”(will也不是不对..只是would更合适..)错句:and ...

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