人教版八下15分作文,请问这么一篇作文会扣几分?

人教版八下15分作文,请问这么一篇作文会扣几分?
Recently our ciass has hold a discussion about"My Dream Summer Holiday".We are glad to hear about it.My classmates' opinion about time is to have two periods:one in July and the other in August.Each period lastes for 10 days to 15days.But I think ,each period should lasts for 8 days to 10days.
My classmates think the summer camp need more activities.For example,do some reading ,play outdoorsports ,have an Engilsh speaking competition.My opinion is to have more useful and interesting activities.Such as an English writing competition or a listening test.
I hope my dream will come ture.